Hmmmm interesting ... loooove the spn reference lol :-):-):-) ahahah.. and i love the clean style of this ... its basically idk train of thought, but a very clean one, no abbriviations, no cussing ... i am sooo not used to that lol :-) so, this is a nice change, to just read description of something without addihg a bunch of weight to it, like we have it in spn fics :-) and i love the description of the town, and the whole scene where he is setting up the gun .. heee, lovely, idk but those scenes are kinda hot :-) and this whole slow getting together is lovely too :-)
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Date: 2013-01-28 08:06 pm (UTC)Great start :-):-)
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